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Help[Opinions] Re: parents names for india,julia,luke and adrian russo
in reply to a message by Realisticmind379
i came up with the kids names a while ago so that would make sence, your right about the parents and there were thye came from. sorry for the confusion.i could change the last name, but if i did then it would have to still be italion or spainish.
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No, it actually doesn't make sense. If a name don't work for a story, or for a certain character, it just doesn't work. Writing a fictionalized story, isn't always about using names you just happen to like. Sometimes you have to use names that work for the character, or for the type of story and setting. You can absolutely use names that you like, but they should at least be believable, especially if these are going to be the main, reoccurring characters.
Also, PLEASE learn how to use proper grammar, spelling and punctuation. It's critical for writing a story and also for general purposes as well. It's less juvenile and also less confusing. For example, I have no idea what you mean by here: your right about the parents and there were thye came from.
Others should be able to understand you clearly, whether that's in a story, through a text, or elsewhere on a screen, or on a piece of paper.
Also, PLEASE learn how to use proper grammar, spelling and punctuation. It's critical for writing a story and also for general purposes as well. It's less juvenile and also less confusing. For example, I have no idea what you mean by here: your right about the parents and there were thye came from.
Others should be able to understand you clearly, whether that's in a story, through a text, or elsewhere on a screen, or on a piece of paper.
This message was edited 7/25/2023, 12:36 PM
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sorry. i am 13 and i cant spell for my life, i write on my comupter
This message was edited 7/25/2023, 12:04 PM
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Spell check and autocorrect is available. However, you need to have even the basic understanding of things like the grammar, and punctuation before even working a story, otherwise the editing process is going to be even more of a nightmare. The spelling alone is something that you can easily fix yourself. Look up a word if you aren't sure how to spell it.
Writing tools that I recommend, and for anyone else as well: Wordhippo.com (free online dictionary. Can also look up synonyms and antonyms, and much more) Loosethevery.com, Grammar.com and Grammarcheck.net. All extremely useful.
Writing tools that I recommend, and for anyone else as well: Wordhippo.com (free online dictionary. Can also look up synonyms and antonyms, and much more) Loosethevery.com, Grammar.com and Grammarcheck.net. All extremely useful.
This message was edited 7/27/2023, 9:14 AM
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thank you
This message was edited 7/25/2023, 12:35 PM
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