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Help[Games] Re: Star Wars Writing Congrats Round 3! (edited again)
in reply to a message by quigonjecca
I'll change the ages myself, but I assume that you'll say how many years have passed.
2nd edit:
I forgot the numbers for next round:
1: 5
2: 1
3: 10
and I changed the layout, I hope that's okay, I think it looks clearer now
Username: X Mar
LN: Quest
DW: Veila Secura (18)
DH: Jacen Declann (24)
DD/DS: Sora Moon / Ingo Ruin (0)
Character info:
Veila Secura Cerulian-Quest:
Occupation: Bounty hunter
Species: Twilek
Colours: Turqoise skin, Purple eyes
Force: Sensitive
Former Jedi Padawan:
Lightsaber: Purple double bladed sabers, Juyo style
Strength: Sense Powers
Weakness: Force-Lightning
Jacen Declann Quest:
Occupation: Bounty hunter
Species: Twilek
Colours: Orange skin, Blue eyes
Force: Not sensitive
Sora Moon Quest:
Species: Twilek
Colours: Purple skin, Black eyes
Force: Not sensitive
Ingo Ruin Quest:
Species: Twilek
Colours: White skin, Green eyes
Force: Sensitive
Master Ryoo Daragon:
Occupation: Master Jedi
Species: Human
Colours: Light skin, Black hair, Green eyes
Force: Sensitive
***
I'm Veila, I'm 18 years old and one day I hope to be a Jedi Knight. I'm currently training, my Master is a human named Ryoo Daragon. I have no parents. My mother raised me, and she died when I was 8. I never knew my father. I'm very good at sensing, and I'm learning more things as well. My Master has given up trying to teach me Force Lightning, because we spent a long time on this already and I could never even produce the tiniest spark. He's teaching me mostly the Juyo fighting style, the style that is his favourite, and I learn easiest. My double bladed saber is the exact same shade of purple as my eyes.
***
When I was with my master on a mission in Trantor, I met a greta Twilek man named Jacen. He's orange and has eyes of the deepest blue. He's tall, even for a Twilek. My Master was sent to Trantor to look for a witness in a polical assassination (a Cathar named Muk), but Jacen had found Muk first and had killed him. My Master was very upset that the witness was gone now, and insisted on questioning Jacen to find out any information that might be useful. Jacen didn't really know anything other than that he had been sent to kill Muk, and would get paid for doing that. He refused to give up the name of the one he worked for. My Master told me that was to be expected, because for a Bounty Hunter such as Jacen, giving up his employers name would seriously harm his reputation in his profession, and then it would be hard for him to get any work, since his reputation was all a Bounty Hunter really had. He let Jacen go and we planned to go back home.
Due to some trouble around Trantor, it wasn't very easy to get out of there and we were forced to stay there a week longer. My Master decided to visit a friend and told me to look after myself for a couple of hours. He told me I was not allowed to go outside of the hotel where we were staying. I as the good Padawan that I am, didn't set a foot outside. Inside, at the bar, I met Jacen again. We talked and I must say that he was quite charming. After talking for a while, he invited me to come to his room, so we would have a more private place to talk. Since it was still inside the hotel, I agreed to go there with him.
When we arrived at his room, I could feel the tension building between us. When he shut the door and walked over to me, I could hear my own heartbeat. As he touched my lekku, I felt a shiver go through me. He pulled me closer to him and kissed me. I was shocked at first, but then I kissed him back. He was so tall, strong and beautiful. He had long lekku that were covered in tattoos. About an hour and a half after I had come to his room, I fell asleep in his arms on his bed.
The next morning I awoke with a shock. I realised that my Master would have been back a long time already and that he was probably looking for me. And also probably very angry with me... I wanted to get up, but Jacen pulled me back and kissed me. I told him I couldn't stay and that I had to get back. He told me he'd come see me before I leave Trantor.
I went back to the room of my Master and he was there waiting for me. I endured a lecture on how irresponsible I'd been and he told me I couldn't leave the room until we left. I didn't tell him that I'd seen Jacen. Later he left the room and then Jacen came to see me. I told him to leave because I was afraid of what might happen if my Master would catch him here. He ignored what I said and walked over to kiss me again. I couldn't resist him.
When my Master came back he was still there. I saw the look on his face and got really scared. He turned to Jacen and said something to him in a language I didn't understand. Jacen spoke back to him and they got in to an argument. Before long, Jacen stormed out of the room slamming the door behind him. My Master only said "Pack your stuff, were leaving now". I did,and we left Trantor.
About six weeks later I realised I was pregnant. I considered not telling my Master, but there was no way a Padawan could ever keep a secret like that from her Master, so I told him. He didn't say anything and wlaked away. I broke down crying, thinking that he had decided to give up on teaching me altogether. INstead he came back an hour later announcing that Jacen was on his way here, because he needed to be involved in this. He explained to me, that a Jedi cannot be pregnant and can never be in a lifelong love relationship. He also said he was very disappointed in me. He said that after talking with Jacen and me tomorrow after he arrived, he would have to ask the council if he would be allowed to teach me any further. I was relieved that he still had the intention of teaching me, but I was very afriad that the council wouldn't allow that to happen.
Jacen came the next day and we decided to get married and let the baby come. My Master went to the council and was allowed to teach me. Jacen told me that according to sources he had, he had been forced to make a great sacrifice to be allowed to do this, but he didn't know what it was that he had given up exactly. I resolved to be a very good student from now on, because that would be the only way I could possibly repay him. Jacen went on his way again, because he had work to do. It was probably the way our marriage would be form then on, I would lead a Jedi life and he would lead a Bounty hunter life, and we would only see each other sporadically.
***
A lot has happened during my pregnancy, it all started when I found out I wasn't just expecting one child, but twins! I told my Master about this and he got very upset. I was surprised by his reaction, because I thought he might have even be happy for me. Then he told me that he couldn't train me anymore....
The whole world had begun to spin aorund me and I couldn't breath for a moment. He explained to me that the council only granted permission to continue the training if I had one child that it would be raised by my Master. Now that there were two children, that couldn't happen. I only half heard what he was saying, because I was still stunned. Later after he had walked away form me, and I had come back to my senses a bit, I felt betrayed by him. He had planned to raise my child without telling me. I guess that was the sacrifice Jacen said he had to make in order to be allowed to continue to train me.
Later I was officially 'released' from the Jedi training and had to hand my lightsaber in. That moment was really painful, I felt like gave them my dreams and my hope when I handed over the lightsaber. I had asked Jacen to come back for me, but he had to work. He did promise to be there when the babies would be born. And he kept that promise.
I gave birth to a beautiful set of twins, a boy and a girl. They don't look at all like each other. The girl, whom we called Sora Moon, is purple and has black eyes. The boy is white and has green eyes, we named him Ingo Ruin (that's rhoo-EEN for us). Jacen adores them, but he has trouble with being a father. Her loves his kids, but he just doesn't seem to know what to do with them when they're crying. I'm thinking that it'll get better when the kids will learn to talk and can explain him what they want.
Sora is a passionate little thing. She laughs a lot and cries a lot. She's always moving and grabbing anything wihtin reach. Ingo is much more easy going and relaxed. He usually is quiet and sweet. Nothing really excites him and nothing really upsets him. One day I walked into their room (we live in a little appartment now, for the time being) and I knew he was hungry and fed him. After I fed him I knew he was tired and wanted to sleep. I put him in his bed and he fell straight to sleep. As I walked away I reaslised he had used the force to let me know what he wanted. I wanted to test if I was right about him and used the force to send both Ingo and Sora the feeling of the lvoe I felt for them. Sora didn't respond at all, but Ingo immediately opened his bright green eyes and looked at me. I could sense that he was content. He closed his eyes and went back to sleep.
I informed Jacen later about what I had found out; that Ingo was force sensitive. He said he was happy about it, but he didn't really fully understand what this could mean. He told me he had a present for me, and I was quite annoyed that he had changed the subject so quickly. He gave me a box and grinned. I wanted to continue our conversation, but was too curious about the box, adn took it from him. I opened it and my heart jumped. My lightsaber! I took it out of the box and started to fight the air in our living room with it. My eyes were fixed on the familiar purple lights dancing before me. After some time (I honestly couldn't say how long it had been), I remembered Jacen. He was still grinning. I jumped in his arms and kissed him.
I aksed him how he had gotten it, and he just kept grinning. When I pressed him for an answer he just said "I have my ways, I have contacts and I can be very stealthy". I didn't really know what that was supposed tomean, but I did know that that was all the answer I was going to get out of him. "You stole it?!" I half-stated half-asked. He grinned again, and declared that he was a bounty hunter, not a thief. I wasn't too sure about that. It would have been extremely difficult for a non-jedi to get a lightsaber.
Now that I wasn't a Padawan anymore, Jace and I decided that I would help him with the bounty hunting. I went from Veila the Jedi Padawan to Veila the Bounty Hunter. I'm still trying to get used to my new life, with a husband, two children and a new career. The more I get to knwo about a bounty hunter's life, the more I think that it is actually more of a criminal career. Jacen has told me some things he had done to get to the person he had been sent after, and I must say that some of those things aren't exactly legal and don't really show moral awareness. He was willing to commit a crime to get to another criminal. I found it most disturbing that he didn't really seem to care anymore about rules and morals, the very things I have been thought are most important. I wondered if I'd become like him after years of bounty hunting.
2nd edit:
I forgot the numbers for next round:
1: 5
2: 1
3: 10
and I changed the layout, I hope that's okay, I think it looks clearer now
Username: X Mar
LN: Quest
DW: Veila Secura (18)
DH: Jacen Declann (24)
DD/DS: Sora Moon / Ingo Ruin (0)
Character info:
Veila Secura Cerulian-Quest:
Occupation: Bounty hunter
Species: Twilek
Colours: Turqoise skin, Purple eyes
Force: Sensitive
Former Jedi Padawan:
Lightsaber: Purple double bladed sabers, Juyo style
Strength: Sense Powers
Weakness: Force-Lightning
Jacen Declann Quest:
Occupation: Bounty hunter
Species: Twilek
Colours: Orange skin, Blue eyes
Force: Not sensitive
Sora Moon Quest:
Species: Twilek
Colours: Purple skin, Black eyes
Force: Not sensitive
Ingo Ruin Quest:
Species: Twilek
Colours: White skin, Green eyes
Force: Sensitive
Master Ryoo Daragon:
Occupation: Master Jedi
Species: Human
Colours: Light skin, Black hair, Green eyes
Force: Sensitive
***
I'm Veila, I'm 18 years old and one day I hope to be a Jedi Knight. I'm currently training, my Master is a human named Ryoo Daragon. I have no parents. My mother raised me, and she died when I was 8. I never knew my father. I'm very good at sensing, and I'm learning more things as well. My Master has given up trying to teach me Force Lightning, because we spent a long time on this already and I could never even produce the tiniest spark. He's teaching me mostly the Juyo fighting style, the style that is his favourite, and I learn easiest. My double bladed saber is the exact same shade of purple as my eyes.
***
When I was with my master on a mission in Trantor, I met a greta Twilek man named Jacen. He's orange and has eyes of the deepest blue. He's tall, even for a Twilek. My Master was sent to Trantor to look for a witness in a polical assassination (a Cathar named Muk), but Jacen had found Muk first and had killed him. My Master was very upset that the witness was gone now, and insisted on questioning Jacen to find out any information that might be useful. Jacen didn't really know anything other than that he had been sent to kill Muk, and would get paid for doing that. He refused to give up the name of the one he worked for. My Master told me that was to be expected, because for a Bounty Hunter such as Jacen, giving up his employers name would seriously harm his reputation in his profession, and then it would be hard for him to get any work, since his reputation was all a Bounty Hunter really had. He let Jacen go and we planned to go back home.
Due to some trouble around Trantor, it wasn't very easy to get out of there and we were forced to stay there a week longer. My Master decided to visit a friend and told me to look after myself for a couple of hours. He told me I was not allowed to go outside of the hotel where we were staying. I as the good Padawan that I am, didn't set a foot outside. Inside, at the bar, I met Jacen again. We talked and I must say that he was quite charming. After talking for a while, he invited me to come to his room, so we would have a more private place to talk. Since it was still inside the hotel, I agreed to go there with him.
When we arrived at his room, I could feel the tension building between us. When he shut the door and walked over to me, I could hear my own heartbeat. As he touched my lekku, I felt a shiver go through me. He pulled me closer to him and kissed me. I was shocked at first, but then I kissed him back. He was so tall, strong and beautiful. He had long lekku that were covered in tattoos. About an hour and a half after I had come to his room, I fell asleep in his arms on his bed.
The next morning I awoke with a shock. I realised that my Master would have been back a long time already and that he was probably looking for me. And also probably very angry with me... I wanted to get up, but Jacen pulled me back and kissed me. I told him I couldn't stay and that I had to get back. He told me he'd come see me before I leave Trantor.
I went back to the room of my Master and he was there waiting for me. I endured a lecture on how irresponsible I'd been and he told me I couldn't leave the room until we left. I didn't tell him that I'd seen Jacen. Later he left the room and then Jacen came to see me. I told him to leave because I was afraid of what might happen if my Master would catch him here. He ignored what I said and walked over to kiss me again. I couldn't resist him.
When my Master came back he was still there. I saw the look on his face and got really scared. He turned to Jacen and said something to him in a language I didn't understand. Jacen spoke back to him and they got in to an argument. Before long, Jacen stormed out of the room slamming the door behind him. My Master only said "Pack your stuff, were leaving now". I did,and we left Trantor.
About six weeks later I realised I was pregnant. I considered not telling my Master, but there was no way a Padawan could ever keep a secret like that from her Master, so I told him. He didn't say anything and wlaked away. I broke down crying, thinking that he had decided to give up on teaching me altogether. INstead he came back an hour later announcing that Jacen was on his way here, because he needed to be involved in this. He explained to me, that a Jedi cannot be pregnant and can never be in a lifelong love relationship. He also said he was very disappointed in me. He said that after talking with Jacen and me tomorrow after he arrived, he would have to ask the council if he would be allowed to teach me any further. I was relieved that he still had the intention of teaching me, but I was very afriad that the council wouldn't allow that to happen.
Jacen came the next day and we decided to get married and let the baby come. My Master went to the council and was allowed to teach me. Jacen told me that according to sources he had, he had been forced to make a great sacrifice to be allowed to do this, but he didn't know what it was that he had given up exactly. I resolved to be a very good student from now on, because that would be the only way I could possibly repay him. Jacen went on his way again, because he had work to do. It was probably the way our marriage would be form then on, I would lead a Jedi life and he would lead a Bounty hunter life, and we would only see each other sporadically.
***
A lot has happened during my pregnancy, it all started when I found out I wasn't just expecting one child, but twins! I told my Master about this and he got very upset. I was surprised by his reaction, because I thought he might have even be happy for me. Then he told me that he couldn't train me anymore....
The whole world had begun to spin aorund me and I couldn't breath for a moment. He explained to me that the council only granted permission to continue the training if I had one child that it would be raised by my Master. Now that there were two children, that couldn't happen. I only half heard what he was saying, because I was still stunned. Later after he had walked away form me, and I had come back to my senses a bit, I felt betrayed by him. He had planned to raise my child without telling me. I guess that was the sacrifice Jacen said he had to make in order to be allowed to continue to train me.
Later I was officially 'released' from the Jedi training and had to hand my lightsaber in. That moment was really painful, I felt like gave them my dreams and my hope when I handed over the lightsaber. I had asked Jacen to come back for me, but he had to work. He did promise to be there when the babies would be born. And he kept that promise.
I gave birth to a beautiful set of twins, a boy and a girl. They don't look at all like each other. The girl, whom we called Sora Moon, is purple and has black eyes. The boy is white and has green eyes, we named him Ingo Ruin (that's rhoo-EEN for us). Jacen adores them, but he has trouble with being a father. Her loves his kids, but he just doesn't seem to know what to do with them when they're crying. I'm thinking that it'll get better when the kids will learn to talk and can explain him what they want.
Sora is a passionate little thing. She laughs a lot and cries a lot. She's always moving and grabbing anything wihtin reach. Ingo is much more easy going and relaxed. He usually is quiet and sweet. Nothing really excites him and nothing really upsets him. One day I walked into their room (we live in a little appartment now, for the time being) and I knew he was hungry and fed him. After I fed him I knew he was tired and wanted to sleep. I put him in his bed and he fell straight to sleep. As I walked away I reaslised he had used the force to let me know what he wanted. I wanted to test if I was right about him and used the force to send both Ingo and Sora the feeling of the lvoe I felt for them. Sora didn't respond at all, but Ingo immediately opened his bright green eyes and looked at me. I could sense that he was content. He closed his eyes and went back to sleep.
I informed Jacen later about what I had found out; that Ingo was force sensitive. He said he was happy about it, but he didn't really fully understand what this could mean. He told me he had a present for me, and I was quite annoyed that he had changed the subject so quickly. He gave me a box and grinned. I wanted to continue our conversation, but was too curious about the box, adn took it from him. I opened it and my heart jumped. My lightsaber! I took it out of the box and started to fight the air in our living room with it. My eyes were fixed on the familiar purple lights dancing before me. After some time (I honestly couldn't say how long it had been), I remembered Jacen. He was still grinning. I jumped in his arms and kissed him.
I aksed him how he had gotten it, and he just kept grinning. When I pressed him for an answer he just said "I have my ways, I have contacts and I can be very stealthy". I didn't really know what that was supposed tomean, but I did know that that was all the answer I was going to get out of him. "You stole it?!" I half-stated half-asked. He grinned again, and declared that he was a bounty hunter, not a thief. I wasn't too sure about that. It would have been extremely difficult for a non-jedi to get a lightsaber.
Now that I wasn't a Padawan anymore, Jace and I decided that I would help him with the bounty hunting. I went from Veila the Jedi Padawan to Veila the Bounty Hunter. I'm still trying to get used to my new life, with a husband, two children and a new career. The more I get to knwo about a bounty hunter's life, the more I think that it is actually more of a criminal career. Jacen has told me some things he had done to get to the person he had been sent after, and I must say that some of those things aren't exactly legal and don't really show moral awareness. He was willing to commit a crime to get to another criminal. I found it most disturbing that he didn't really seem to care anymore about rules and morals, the very things I have been thought are most important. I wondered if I'd become like him after years of bounty hunting.
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